Authors Note:
Some time back I had thought of directing a short movie, and this storyline was lingering in my mind since long. During the development of the script, I somehow felt that I should try publishing this as a story even before attempting to direct it. Hence, the script development was stalled and I went on to write the story.
I had many people complaining, when I stopped writing 'Not At First Sight'. But I will assure you that 'And She Smiled' is not destined for that. ( Well, it also depends on how well this episode is going to be received by you).
It also forms a part of my duty to tell you that, this story is not based on my real life. ;)
Let me thank my friend Archi,for the valuable time that she spent on proof reading this.
Enjoy reading it and please share it if you like it...!! :)
Episode 1
“Sorry..!! Got late!” she said. She was
panting and trying hard to smile through it. It was an open air restaurant
amidst a beautiful garden. ‘Fresh Air and a Coffee’- the restaurant’s board
read. There were about a couple of dozen people - old and young alike, warming
the seats. The sun light escaping the long
branches of the tall green trees had drawn beautiful patterns all over the
place.
The
girl stood next to the chair and was waiting for the response from the young
man in blue shirt who was sitting across the table. Either he was very much
involved in the novel he was reading – ‘Not
At First Sight’ or he was making a deliberate attempt to ignore this girl.
Handfuls
of photography enthusiasts were seen lying on the chest, squatting in awkward
postures in order to capture their objects of interest in the most beautiful manner
and from a perfect angle. It was nine in the morning and the place looked
beautiful in the rays of sunshine –just like a painting.
“Okay,
I get it”, she said shaking her head mildly. A brief pause and she continued. “Clearly
you should be angry. But it was this Bangalore Traffic that got me late, you
know? It was not carelessness on my part” said she. Her fingers were busy,
playing with the straps of her bag.
She had
worn a yellow kurti with floral patterns all over it. She was looking pretty.
Just that the green hair clip seemed to be quite out of place.
The guy
looked up, out from his book and threw a questioning look at her. There was an
exchange of awkward glances and he spoke.
“Sorry?”
he spoke.
The
girl smiled “Why are you being sorry..! It’s okay. You weren’t all that rude”
and placed her hands on the chair.
“No., I
wasn’t apologizing. Sorry as in, Sorry! Do I know you? That’s what I meant” he
replied quickly. He had now closed his novel and kept it on the table.
“Oh. I
am sorry. Actually you are wearing a blue shirt, So...”
“So..?”
he asked.
“Actually
there’s a small misunderstanding you know! I was supposed to meet a movie
director here. We haven’t seen each other before. And we decided that he would
come in a blue shirt and I will be in yellow, so that we could find it easy to
recognize each other” she replied.
The
smile on her face had disappeared by now. Yet, she was looking pretty and charming
like those girls in any Disney animated movies.
The guy
looked at his shirt, laughed mildly and raised his spectacles.
“Oh. I see!
But you could have taken his phone number right?” he fired his first question.
Without waiting for her response, he went on to pose few more questions.
“You say that he is a director, how come you
don’t know him by face?”
“Okay, how did you both communicate?”
“If through phone, you should have had his
phone number and you could have called him, right?”
“If ‘twas through Facebook, you would have at
least seen his profile picture right?”
“Or
did you tr...” he was yet to complete his questionnaire, when she spoke.
“Look..!
I feel like telling you that this is none of your business” she took her hands off
the chair.
“Oops..!
I am really sorry”, he made an attempt to apologize and continued “So you were
supposed to meet a director. So you must be an actress. So, how many mov...”
before she interrupted him again. It was obvious that she was getting annoyed.
“You
Know what? I am getting late. I’ve to leave. See you”, she turned around and
prepared to leave but, it was his turn now – to interrupt her. She had to find
the right person now- the director in a blue shirt.
“Akshay..!”
she heard him saying. He had tied his hands behind his head and was leaning
against the chair.
She
quickly looked back and exclaimed “Akshay…!! I mean Sir! So I was right in the first
place itself. And what was all that about? This is so embarrassing.”
An old lady
sitting in the neighboring table, who was in the middle of some serious phone
call, looked a little upset with the sudden squeaky voice of the female.
“You
know what..? I am getting late. See you!” He mimicked the girl and laughed..
“Stop
it..!” said the girl fighting her way out of embarrassment. “Sir..!”, she felt
the need to add a sir.
“Stop
calling me Sir! Call me Akshay, that’s what my friends do” said he.
The old
lady threw annoyed looks; yet again .The waiter approached the table and placed
the menu card on it.
“Good
morning” Akshay greeted him while trying hard to suppress his laughter.
“Okay
sir, I mean Akshay! I think you should stop. Now if you please, may I sit?” she
asked and pulled the chair.
“If
sitting on the chair is what you have in your mind, then I am not going to
object” said he with a wide grin as he surfed through the menu.
“No. My
intent was to sit on your head” she smirked.
The
waiter who was standing next to them was clearly enjoying the conversation as
he forced his lips against revealing that smile.
“On my
head..? Oh... desperate to sit on a hot seat?” came the repartee and he acted
as if he was trying to adjust his hair. He then winked at the waiter and
whispered in a soft voice, “Quite a show isn’t it? Give us a minute to decide
the order”.
The waiter
obliged with a courteous nod and made an exit from the scene.
“Hot
Seat? Okay, let me take a guess at what you are expecting now. Me laughing out
loud on your dumb and stupid joke?” She sat on the chair and raised her
eyebrows.
“You
mean L.. O.. L? Nope. I have a better
expectation. How about rolling on the floor and laughing?” He winked and looked
at the group of photographers at the distance.
The
small group of photographers had found something interesting on the green
grass, and they were all lying flat on the ground and were seen pointing their
camera at it.
“Not so
funny. I think we should start discussing work” she said.
“As you
say Ms. Workaholic.! But first let’s order something”. He waved his hand at the
waiter.
“Coffee and green Otingos please. So neetu,
what will you have?”
“Its nitya and not neetu. I will have crispy
bites, capprico brunetto and Mario pompeshol please”.
***************************************************************
Nitya was
a twenty something girl and Akshay, a twenty five something guy. Nitya was a
pretty lady with flowing, let loose hair and Akshay was a tall, slim guy who sported
a clean French beard. She wore thick framed glasses while he had the frameless
ones.
Nitya
was doing her literature from Clewman’s Girls College and was also a columnist
at ‘Bangalore Reads’- a fortnightly
publication. Well, it is not a prominent magazine of the city, but she used to
write stories in her column and she had a decent reader following.
In her
‘about me’ section, she had also
claimed that she’s a playwright apart from being an avid reader, dancer, cook,
badminton player, singer,photographer etc.
Her
facebook profile picture was a selfie- posing as about to kiss the camera. In
her cover picture she was seen dressed in a gorgeous red sari and alongside
four other pretty ladies. While the profile pic had 231 likes, the cover pic
had managed 471.
Akshay
was an Engineer by profession and in his three years of professional life he
had hardly worked on any project and was mostly asked to warm the bench- no work, only pay.
He
always dreamt of becoming a movie director and hence his Facebook profile
picture was that of Stephen Spielberg with a quote. He had shot five short
movies and all these movies had earned him praises from his friend circles.
However, it’s a best kept secret that, they were all lying when they had
praised him.
One day
after watching some inspirational speech on YouTube, for the first time in his
life he felt like doing a short movie without copying the plot from other
movies. There was a film festival due to happen in the city and he firmly
believed that he stood a great chance of winning it easily.
Now, that he had decided against being a
plagiarist, he also felt that it was high time to have a screen writer to assist
him. It was through his friend, whose girlfriend’s sister happened to be a fan
of Nitya’s stories that he came to know about her. He quickly wrote to her
asking if she was willing to write the screenplay for his short movie and she
had responded positively. I don’t know if it was an auspicious date, but they
had decided to meet at this place on the fourth Friday of February.
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“Akshay,
I think I should tell you this, I have no previous experience in writing screenplays”
she spoke with hesitation and paused for two seconds. “By the way who’s
producing your movie? Who’s playing the leads? What’s the budget?” her rapid
fire round was on.
It was
then that Akshay realized he hadn’t told her the most important part of the
project. He searched for words and then responded. “Ah. Well..!! I think you
have kept high enough expectations. I forgot to tell you that it’s a short
movie and not a feature film”. He said. ‘I
am just another random person who shoots cheap short movies hoping to make it big
one day’ he wondered if he should have added a filmy line and looked at
her. He couldn’t help but notice that her face had dropped.
“BFI
has organized a short movie festival and I was planning to submit an entry. I
wanted to have a strong and genuine script, hence thought of asking someone
really good at that, to do it. And I found you”, said he. ‘was it necessary to say really good at it?’ he asked himself. ‘It was needed to ease off things’,
spoke his inner self.
Nitya
looked at him, took a deep breath and there was a long silence. After thirty
seconds she spoke.
“I am
not that hungry” saying so she turned towards the waiter, who was near the
counter and asked him to cancel the order.
“What was that?” he looked annoyed, “I am
going to pay your bill, don’t worry. And there is no reason for you to put up
that face after knowing that it’s a short movie. I was not expecting you to
work for free and I was anyway going to pay you” he said.
“I
didn’t mean that. Seriously I’m not hungry”
“Hmm
Okay! I should have told you that it’s a short movie. You seem to have spent
needless hours on your makeup” he put up a sorry face.
“Arrey.!!
I am not dropping out. I’m still interested in working with you and I think you
should stop being sorry” she said and smiled. All of a sudden she seemed to
have realized something and said “By the way, what do you mean by needless
hours on the makeup?”. She tried acting
angry.
“I
wanted to say that, you are looking good. It was a compliment in disguise”
“I
didn’t ask for any compliments”
“It’s a
Diwali offer- free compliments. You
can have it”
“I am
in no need of free compliments. And I think you should start improving your
sense of humor”.
Akshay
had always thought that he had the best sense of humor in the town and his
sense of pride was slowly being hurt by Nitya who looked tired of his humorless
jokes.
He
pulled a tissue paper and moved his fingers over it. Few twists and tampers,
and within no time he made a rose out of it.
“White
Rose. Peace?”, he held it in front of her.
“Fine” , she smiled at him and accepted the tissue rose. “It’s time that we start discussing work. You can start with narrating the story, if you have any in mind. As and when I feel that something is not convincing or good, I will interrupt. I will start putting things on paper only when we are done with the whole plot”.
“Cool..!”
he said and raised his spectacle. He was now trying to act like a proficient director.
“This is a love story, a beautiful love story. We have a hero and a heroine.
And they..” He stopped as she
interrupted.
“And
they meet each other in a restaurant. And after a couple of meets they fall in
love with each other. I think this is what you were going to tell me. But, can
you please start from the opening scene and explain the story scene by scene”,
saying so she raised her eyebrows. She
had this habit of raising her eyebrows every now and then.
Before
he could speak, she added “And please stop raising those hands and trying to
act like a director. Looks weird” and laughed.
“Okay Madam!
So here you go, from the opening scene”, he grew conscious and tied his hands.
He winked at her and continued, “The scene opens in a bus and we show our lead
sitting there. We will call him Mohit. Now, Mohit will be shown looking at his
right side every now and then.”
“He is
looking at the lady right? The heroine?” she interrupted.
“Yeah!”
he answered with a mild hint of fuss. “We will call her Neetu. Mohit is shown looking
at her every now and then. Well, he is not one of those rogue kind, he is just
like any other innocent guy who tries hard to get a second glimpse of the lady,
with whom he has fallen in love, at first sight. So, he is looking at her
and ” Akshay was narrating the story
passionately.
“And
finally she looks at him right?”, there she was, yet again, like a speed
breaker interrupting him.
“Yes..!
And stop hurrying. Be Patient. I doubt if you will even wait for nine months to
deliver a baby, I think you will do so in just three months. Ms. Restless”, he laughed.
It didn’t sound funny.
“Disgusting..!”
she put up an angry face and mildly slammed on the table. “Stop speaking disgusting
things. One more attempt from you to crack a joke, and I will leave right
away”.
“Sorry..!”,
he apologized and grabbed the tissue rose from her hand. “Peace?” he said in
guilt tone and offered her the rose again.
“Next
time you do that, forget peace. I will cut you into pieces”, she said and waved
the table knife at him. He acted being scared.
“Okay!
Now continue your story” she ordered, hiding her smile behind that commanding
tone.
“As you
say your highness! Coming back to the story, all of a sudden the heroine looks
at him, just like the way you had guessed”
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Mohit
was a little tensed now. Yes of course he was happy and excited. Yet, his heart
was pounding like those drums in a rock concert- fast and loud. The reason being
the girl sitting next to him- with whom he had fallen in love ten minutes back,
was smiling at him now. He is not an exception; every guy in the universe
complies by this unnamed law of the universe pertaining to heartbeat.
“Hi!”,
she was a little nervous. Yet, she was trying to smile.
Mohit
grinned and replied “Hi!”. Not sure as
what else to do, he scratched his head and extended his hand. “Mohit”, he said.
She didn’t
find it necessary to shake hands with him, instead she asked, “Can we swap
places? I want to sit next to the window. I am feeling dizzy and getting a vomit
sensation”. So here she was, proving it again- A girl’s smile comes at a cost.
“Sure
sure.! No Problem. Please.!” He tried being extra polite and got up. In the
process the luggage rack above him, hit his head.
He rubbed his head, grinned at her and said
“Sorry! I was little excited. Soo..”, he gave a brief pause and continued “And,
take care of your head”.
She
didn’t smile but quickly moved towards the window and put her head out of the window.
The next moment, Mohit was trying hard to look comfortable as he could hear her
puking.
One
hundred and fifty seconds later, he looked at her again. She looked at him. She
was done with whatever she had in store.
“Hi” he
smiled by mustering all his courage.
She
smiled in response.
“Can I
sit next to the window? I want to.” he didn’t complete his sentence. Instead,
he chose to point his fingers at his mouth.
The
next moment the beautiful girl was seen getting increasingly uncomfortable and
trying her level best to cover her nose and ears simultaneously.
Mohit
was seen with his head out of the window -vomiting ugly and loud.
**************************************************************
“What
happened?” Akshay asked.
Nitya
had rested her chin against her palm and was biting her lips- her eyebrows
trying to touch her hairline.
“Nothing!
It’s interesting. I mean it’s good, very good” , she fumbled with words.
Few
people are good at it- Telling a
beautiful lie and making the other person realize that it’s a lie. It’s not
exactly sarcasm, but sarcasm in disguise.
Take
for instance, a boyfriend trying hard to lie to his girl that she looked pretty
in her new dress. He doesn’t want to disappoint her. But she can easily make
out that he is lying.
Nitya
was doing the same thing; just that she went a mile further by giving him
enough leads to realize that his story was bad. That’s why she had deliberately
fumbled with words and that’s what you call- sarcasm in disguise.
“Don’t
lie”, he smirked. Her mission was accomplished. “You are bad at it. If you
didn’t like it, you have every right to say it on my face” he sounded like a
women rights activist.
“It’s
not like that. It’s just that something like vomiting in the opening scene,
will it sound good? I mean imagine the audience covering their eyes and ears in
the very first minute. And there are very high chances that few might end up
puking then and there” she tried acting anxious.
The
waiter placed the food on the table and left.
“I
thought that the movie should start with a bang”, said he.
“Exactly!
With a bang..!” she took a sip of the drink.
“Actually
you are making sense. Fine, let’s change it. I had one more scene in mind. It
goes like this.” He took a deep breath.
“ It’s
eight o clock in the evening. And it’s quite dark outside. There is a bus stop where
an innocent looking guy and a girl are seen waiting for a bus. The story is set
up in the 80’s and both of them are seen in retro outf..”, he started
narrating.
She
smiled as she took another sip of the drink and started listening to him.
-To Be continued….
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